Triveni is a form of poetry invented by Gulzar.
As we all know, Triveni is the sangam of three rivers, Ganga, Jamuna, and Saraswati. The first two lines of a Triveni represent Ganga and Jamuna, and provide complete meaning to the topic. However, the third line, Saraswati provides a completely new dimension to what’s being said.
The triveni is all about the third line....which gives the verse a new dimension.
Here are few which I wrote:
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poori raat kagaz ghise, syaahi kharchi
taaref mein teri, ek poori nazm likh daali
tune nazar daali savere, akhbaar utha liya
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main bhi ek gul hoon, mere andar bhi gulzaar hai
kagaz pakda, kalam uthayee aur kaside likh diye
raat khuda ne samjhaya, sirf ek banaya hai usne
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kharche kam karne ka jo silsila tha,
aaj maine akhbaar bhi band kara diya
tum saari duniya ka haal bata dete ho
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dekha apne jism ko zameen par
apni maut ke kuch lamhon baad
jo kuch bhi tha, main nahi tha
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aaine mein kuch kharabi thi
dikhlata na tha surat-ien asal
naram-dil tha, bechara aainaa
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Wohi kahani, do bhai-
ek garib, doosra amir
bharat ek, dooja india
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Hope you will like these :)
5 comments:
My response to TRIVENI:
poori raat kagaz ghise, syaahi kharchi
taaref mein teri, ek poori nazm likh daali
tune nazar daali savere, akhbaar utha liya
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dekha apne jism ko zameen par
apni maut ke kuch lamhon baad
jo kuch bhi tha, main nahi tha
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aaine mein kuch kharabi thi
dikhlata na tha surat-ien asal
naram-dil tha, bechara aainaa
these three are my favorites :) the first one brings a smile on my face..the second one makes me think...& the third one...well this one is responsible for our friendship! :)
would love to see you writing more trivenis...!
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